People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of developing modern transportation systems instead of building new roads and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although all developed transportation system are beneficial as they are regarded by a substantial number of individuals, some governments hold opponents views and have a tendency to expand the new roads. I am inclined to believe that these development systems is more beneficial as they could develop some brilliant aspects for their adherents.
From a social standpoint, utilizing modern and developed types of transporting inhabitants has several advantages and they can be a plus and they are rooted in the fact of developing. An array of settlers much prefer using modern transport system including monorail, subway, online taxies and advanced buses. They argued that loads of difficulties will be diminished or improved by utilizing these systems including traffic, their high maintanance expenditure, the rate of accidents and crowding. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the benefits of expanding the advanced transportaion systems and it consist of saving time and money, safety, convenience and their cheaper price for citizents.
On the one hand, constructing modern systems in order to transport has some restrictions and due to these factors governments would like to build roads. These limitations are the high technology for constructing them, developing the culture for utilizing them and the high rate of investing.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of using modern systems for transporting far outweigh of its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
...e advanced transportaion systems and it consist of saving time and money, safety, conve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63396226415 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16952828925 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9003759381 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.3 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 7.25397266985 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207532167801 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088161437142 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451088650755 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124175621057 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284755490949 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 12.6369458128 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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