People today rely too much on the internet. To what extent do you agree? Support your argument with reasons and examples.
The advent of the internet has changed the world in a big way. While some people believe that we rely on the internet for each and everything in life, others maintain an opposite view. This essay will discuss how people get too much dependent on web surfing and, therefore, too much reliant on the internet.
The boom in information technology allowed websites to become so popular that it is now impossible to imagine a life without internet. However, there are many unnecessary aspects of web surfing which makes people lazy and aloof to social relations. For example, there are hundreds of social media networks on the internet that promote people to squander their time chatting and watching non-productive videos. This makes it clear that nowadays people tend to become too much relying on the internet.
Despite the evident social impacts, some people think that internet has not reached addictive levels in the minds of users. But what they don’t understand is that internet-based companies are the topmost revenue earning businesses in the world now. This trend of excess dependency on the internet has already given rise to internet-based frauds. Based on these facts, it is clear that society is now alarmingly more reliant on the internet.
This essay discussed multiple instances where people are addicted to internet usage. In my opinion, the world has become too much dependent on the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16883116883 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64681003158 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5670995671 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5955906832 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230897074059 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921224969636 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583177677228 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158066647777 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332796292163 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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