Q- Some people think law changes our behavior? Discuss.
In various countries around the world, there are different sets of law. These are essential for the smooth working of society, as well as preventing any type of crime. Some people opine that the law put a great effect on our behavior. I strongly agree with the given notion. This essay will elaborate on the viewpoints and hence lead to a reasoned conclusion.
There is a myriad of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the law is a set of rules, which prevents an individual to indulge in any antisocial activity and punish if he does. Due to this fear the criminal psychology of the person is changed to a great extent. For example, in Arab countries there are strict laws for theft or robbery; as a result, their crime rate is quite low as compared to other countries. Therefore, it is needless to say that the law definitely changes the behavior of a person.
Another pivotal aspect for upholding this notion is that these laws tend to bring discipline in human life. As an illustration, the penalty for breaking the traffic rules or anti-pollution law enforces people to follow them. Not only it ensures their safety but also proves beneficial for the society. In addition, there are several laws like property, federal or scientific law, which does not have a direct effect on public behavior but are indispensable for the overall wellbeing. Therefore, the law has an important role in molding and controlling the activities of a person.
In view of the arguments outlined above, it can be concluded that the significance of the law is too dire, that helps to control the emotion of a person. Thus, restricting them to behave in the criteria’s set by law.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76610169492 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79885066903 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.191558697 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7058823529 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252638507841 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791787503378 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10306063384 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146157823343 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460456936176 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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