Should Age discrimination against older workers be made illegal?

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Should Age discrimination against older workers be made illegal?

One of the most Conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the discrimination against older workers. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a number of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There is the number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant want is that old people are our creator and they are more experienced. In fact, not only they share knowledge and guidance but they can also challenge the youngsters as they are very mature and have patients. We can find overwhelming evidence that older worker can provide correct decisions at work which helps organisations. Needless to say, the merits stand old people in good stead as far as helping in concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of these arguments is that there shouldn't be any kind of discrimination in the workplace as it is the place to show their work and their capacity to build the organisation in a sound way. Besides, those who are against the old worker discrimination regarding age should be punished. Hence, this is why many are against in discriminating older worker.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of older worker are too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...aspect of these arguments is that there shouldnt be any kind of discrimination in the wo...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sound way" with adverb for "sound"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...heir capacity to build the organisation in a sound way. Besides, those who are against the old...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, regarding, so, in fact, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91627906977 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94233013991 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572093023256 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2948170199 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278677426048 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105400147446 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13379742454 0.071462118173 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159859955096 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136970419681 0.0609392437508 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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