Some democrats claim that people who do not take part in voting processes do not have the right to complaint about the situation their communities are in. What is your position regarding this opinion?
Nowadays we are living in the democracy system, where people can choose their leader vy voting system. That's why some people think that people should not have any right to complaint about any situation, who do not participate in the voting processes. I will discuss some advantages, disadvantages and my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, that people who do not take part in the voting system, if they will not complaint against any crime or situation, it will be arised the discrimination among that people, due to which any person will commit crime with them. Moreover, if they will not get justice, they will involve in the crime themselves, due to which crime rate will be increased.
On the flip side, some people believe that who do not take part in voting processes, they do not have the right to complaint about any system, because this law will stimulate them for further voting process. Besides this, the people who do not vote, they are also participant in the corrupt system, if all people will select their leader, then corruption will be increased dy by day.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But my opinion is if all people will participate in voting system, then they can improve the political system. So that despite some demerits, but merits cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83982683983 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50453758855 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528138528139 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3492410251 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288461861887 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129470555854 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122073353952 0.071462118173 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202088572827 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119316018664 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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