Some developed countries have spent billions of dollars on space research. Some people consider this to be an irresponsible attitude since millions of people on Earth are suffering from hunger. What is your opinion
Modern man has raised from the bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed, accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. LIkewise, many countries have spent too much money on space research, whereas it is not good because millions of people are facing hunger due to the poverty. I partially agree with this topic and I will discuss both views and give my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, space researches are beneficial for the population, because scientists get lots of knowledge about other planets. Secondly, they also evidences about aliens life and they can know is life possible on other planets as earth. Moreover, it also increase the rate of employment, because many people get employment in space agencies. Furthermore, if government will help the poor people to improve their life, then they will fully dependent on the government, due to which they will not do hard work.
On the other hand, some people think, the government spend money on space research, instead of they should use money on people, who are living in under the poverty line, so that they can live good life and their offspring should be provided free education. Besides this, government should install more and more factories, so that will help for development in nation, this proposal will also provide work for ideal individuals.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion along with space researches, government should provide more and more employment for common population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'evidence'
Suggestion: evidence
...bout other planets. Secondly, they also evidences about aliens life and they can know is ...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...her planets as earth. Moreover, it also increase the rate of employment, because many pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06538461538 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61837781209 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9925613687 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.727272727 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.25397266985 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18264895601 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665091585243 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058456987709 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107636327853 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490163752563 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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