Some people argue that young people should concentrate on study or work. Some people think it is better to put energy in activities designed to broaden their experience, such as international travel and volunteering. Support with examples or cases.
Young people need to prepare for their future carefully due to the complexity and competition in modern society. While some people think that they should concentrate on study or work, others believe focusing on life experience through activities such as international travel volunteering are important. This essay will discuss why it is more important to gain life experience than focusing on study or work.
Young people could accumulate wealth of knowledge and experience by doing activities such as traveling and volunteering on different cultures. Due to globalization, today everyone has to work with different people from different cultures and it is not an easy task to do. Most of the large organizations have their offices in different countries and, they recruited people from different countries. As a result of this modern diverse working environment, young people must focus on their life experience.
Some people believe that knowledge accumulated through study and work are more beneficial for young people. They are unaware that theories and some work experience won't help much to deal with much complex and dynamic modern society. A person from America who do not have any experience about culture in China will struggle to work together. Only college or work experience won't help to work in much small but highly diverse global village.
Whether young people should focus on study or life experience is a much-divided argument in present society. In my opinion young people should put energy on gaining life experience than study or work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, as to, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29032258065 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77984935472 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528225806452 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3140205979 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367613509352 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151874434264 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950178295906 0.071462118173 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245164082907 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529287932373 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.