Some people believe that aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. Give your opinion.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 8.36945812808 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 20.9802955665 10% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 31.9359605911 6% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 90.0 1207.87684729 7% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 18.0 242.827586207 7% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.05976714391 3.92707691288 52% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.44948974278 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 17.0 139.433497537 12% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.944444444444 0.580463131201 163% => OK
syllable_count: 30.6 379.143842365 8% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6551724138 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.5024630542 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 45.0 104.977214359 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.0 20.9669160288 43% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 7.25397266985 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 1.0 0.242375264174 413% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.576106375976 0.0925447433944 623% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.252679417981 0.071462118173 354% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 1.0 0.151781067708 659% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 12.6369458128 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.88 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 4.0 55.0591133005 7% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.94827586207 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.3980295567 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.