Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.Which option works

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Some people prefer to listen to music while studying, as music has a calming effect on the mind. Others prefer a pin drop silence in order to concentrate on the content they are studying and have an undivided attention while they do so.
Which option works better for you and why do you think the other option is not viable to ensure a successful study time?

While some people believe that listen to music while studying is one of the best tool to ingrain the whole material in mind, others think that silence works better. They talk over that an environment surrounded by silence is the best option to memorize syllabus. In my opinion, silence is the best option to choose when studying.
First of all, being in a wholly peaceful environment has the best chance to succeed. It is said that people who have been studying in a calm place are likely to obtain better results than compared with those who have not been under such conditions. When studying, our brain needs totally to be focused on the subject without having any disturbances around. That is the reason why some students who have some deficits in attention receive better marks compared with those who do not have any problems when having nocturnal studies.
Moreover, even calm musics affect badly our mind. Our brain has two parts which process the received information. The right part that is responsible to calculate the information and the left that assimilates it. Therefore, it is quite impossible to absolve the information when we are trying to study and listen to music due to the fact that our brain only processes one piece of information at a time.
Finally, always studying under silent conditions outdoes studying listen to music because we ought to have a refresh mind when doing the activity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nal studies. Moreover, even calm musics affect badly our mind. Our brain has two...
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...isten to music because we ought to have a refresh mind when doing the activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, moreover, so, therefore, while, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 5.94088669951 303% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90416666667 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49624370583 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2102682192 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0833333333 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29981370705 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990103761125 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833358724505 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175777924404 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894968073815 0.0609392437508 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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