Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of law changes how human behavior, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The significant influence of people may agree or disagree has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on nowadays in recent years.
it can be agreed that it can generate a wide of views from different perspectives. therefore, this essay will elaborate how some people can agree and how they can not be acceptble for this matter and thus it will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why a human behavior has been changed for the law, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that who do not follow law can suffer consequences about it . As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that 75% of countries that have restricted law have less crimes and problems regarding to strikes and murders. therefore, a country have to ruled for several laws that can punish who commit any infractions.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which might overwhelm the substantial influence without any law a country can be unsuccessful and have many issues to be solved for who disagree with that, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that when rules a set up for all the society and they will agree that. For instance, countries like Venezuela are having many problems because they law are not settle properly. Hence, I agree that law can change human behavior being settle properly.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of law changes human behavior is distinguished, and renovated time to time following the evaluation of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 5.94088669951 269% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01779359431 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79561298091 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5167564142 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294884903355 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124207972484 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849867962805 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169471992054 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052186845883 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.