Some people work for long hours and hard to achieve success and some give importance to free time for them. Give your opinion and discuss your views.
Recently, hardworking and importance of leisure time has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the positive and negative consequences of hardworking?". Whereas it is a widely held view that working for long hours is highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the psychology standpoint, dairy activities are bound up inextricably with human mind, which indicates they lead to both physical and mental health. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between stressful life style and depression as well as an exponential increase in lioness. Their academic criticism was impressive. consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of modern society is correlated positively with not only time shortage but also less relaxation.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, family expenditure attribute to monthly payment, in that it would come down to bank loan, children caring, and transportation. A salient example of such attribution is job opportunities, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take health ignorance for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint not having leisure activities problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to playing with children, riding bicycle, and even climbing mountain. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of educational system, cultural values, mass media and celebrities.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of having sufficient free time are of more significance. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83501683502 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22152376599 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 139.433497537 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703703703704 0.580463131201 121% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0449618618 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105445757615 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310664477745 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463673283553 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621698104481 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430297980475 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 55.0591133005 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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