sports stars and film stars
T he importance of sports stars and glamorous film stars which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. this easy will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that sports is very important for all players. Consequently film stars are a role model for youngsters. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that support is very famous for all players. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but on of the crucial effects is that successful sports stars and glamorous and famous the all world . Hence, it is apparent why many are against favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04166666667 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69980803988 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4995346567 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309546360841 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120099024428 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15467653785 0.071462118173 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220430247058 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884873277003 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.