Student need extra class after school parent opinion.

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Student need extra class after school parent opinion.

This is the compatative world where we need a lot of talent to cope with recent challenge. Student need more extra class to know alel thing which make us perfect in our life. I will explain the key point of my stance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, i can offer variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these students always try to know new thing and they have curicity energy of doing any extra class. School period is the right time to teach extra activities. There are different types of extra activities dancing, swimming, singing, exercise yoga classes these things necessary for children. A primary example of extra class is my daughter riya joined dance class and now, she is one of the best dancer in his school.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view are extra class make child more tired and mental burden. If parent well manage their routine
She is not feel more fatigue. Parent play important role whether children become perfect in all activities or not. Parent also take care about their diet and routine habit, routine is flowed by child or not.
Finally, after taking aforementioned point in to consideration from personal prospective I am inclined to believed that extra classes is more beneficial than harm so every parent need to provided their children extra class.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83189655172 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3884405967 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3034348897 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2307692308 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371152496946 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113257183343 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873664874641 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185555893972 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824382287503 0.0609392437508 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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