Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports really good for us?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is team sports, which is promoting a great ways to build character and to keep fit. There is widespread worry that these sports are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior, and this will only lead to a myriad of impacts on our lives in recent years. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
At the outset, there are number of arguments in favour of my stance, but the most preponderant one is rooted in the fact that team sports bring happiness in our society. Not only can team sports reduce stress level in people, but it also can create a healthy and prosperous society. For example, research in this area invariably reveals, soccer helps to reduce the everyday stress by eighty percent of the general public and help them to keep healthy. Thus, it is obviously true that team sports have more benefits than drawbacks.
Another pivotal aspect of team sports is that it reunites the country and pushes them for the positive changes. Besides, sports help young generation to keep out all the bad behaviors such as drugs and alcohol. For an illustration, according to new research from Harvard University, eighty-five percent of the Australian population are in positive tracks, thanks to the Team sports. Therefore, it is apparent why many people are in favour of team sports.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that sports have many benefits than its drawbacks and indeed they are too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...team sports, which is promoting a great ways to build character and to keep fit. The...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...veryday stress by eighty percent of the general public and help them to keep healthy. Thus, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9358490566 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60755536137 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5336171398 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339957181095 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107025815501 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756913717617 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185291974941 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774627861223 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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