Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Law is about setting a predefined set of rules that need to be followed in order to achieve desire result.While some might disagree with the statement that laws might change human behavior, I believe that ,any rules that is designed to be followed automatically influence human behavior. This essay will further describe about the agreement with the statement.
When we enforce any rules and regulation it is evident that people are obligated to obey them, in this process of obeying rules that act as a law will automatically influence human behavior and in turn become their habits.The best example is law for wearing helmets whiling driving, this made me carry helmets every time i want to drive my vehicle also it turns out to be my habit in carrying helmets each time i think of driving. This explains how law which enforce rules on people might become a habit and in turns affect human behavior.
Furthermore, human behavior will be affected from the laws imposed on them, this is because humans are obligated to follow laws failing which might have to face penalties that most human avoid to have, this fear of getting in troubles for not obeying laws makes human left with no choice but to obey laws hence we see change in their behavioral patterns. This explain our laws can influence human behaviors.
To conclude, laws do influence human behavior as humans need to obey those rules which in turns become their habit and hence their behavior too get affected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86904761905 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45188968727 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519841269841 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.844040828 50.4703680194 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.285714286 104.977214359 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.9669160288 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338131888655 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173802865308 0.0925447433944 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807131352586 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223689585553 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534638830919 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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