Television is good for us ? discuss in both view
In last few years television is become more popular in all over the world. Television provide both education and entertainment. There are several programs and channels to watch. In that less numbers of entertainment channel to watch,If we want to get benefits through tv we use to choose right programs to see. And some other people use to watch for their leisure time because they didn't have any jobs so that they use to see mega serial to overtime. In my point I neither agree or disagree it's because it contain benefits and drawbacks of watching television.
Firstly in television gives plenty of knowledge in informative programs that also provide a reasonable amount of entertainment. For example the channels such as discovery and animal planet provide entertainment as well as information. We can learn lot of things by just watching these channels . Meanwhile news channels keep us informed of national and international events.
For most people, television is a tool for obtaining entertainment. They are not looking for information. They just want to kill time and that is not such a bad thing. There is no harm in using television as an entertainment too. We only need to limit the time spent in front of tv box. If we set enough time for other more important activities like work or study, television will have negative impact on us .
To conclude its depend on what we watch in television and how much hours that we spend in that. instead of spending in some other channel we use some informative channel to gain our knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...pular in all over the world. Television provide both education and entertainment. There...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun numbers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...programs and channels to watch. In that less numbers of entertainment channel to wat...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , If
...umbers of entertainment channel to watch,If we want to get benefits through tv we u...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...f we want to get benefits through tv we use to choose right programs to see. And so...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...et benefits through tv we use to choose right programs to see. And some other people ...
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Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... programs to see. And some other people use to watch for their leisure time because...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...tch for their leisure time because they didnt have any jobs so that they use to see m...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e they didnt have any jobs so that they use to see mega serial to overtime. In my p...
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Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
...o overtime. In my point I neither agree or disagree its because it contain benefit...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...In my point I neither agree or disagree its because it contain benefits and drawbac...
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Line 1, column 507, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contains'?
Suggestion: contains
...either agree or disagree its because it contain benefits and drawbacks of watching tele...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f things by just watching these channels . Meanwhile news channels keep us informe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...hings by just watching these channels . Meanwhile news channels keep us informed of natio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t want to kill time and that is not such a bad thing. There is no harm in using t...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...levision will have negative impact on us . To conclude its depend on what we watc...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... on what we watch in television and how much hours that we spend in that. instead o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...d how much hours that we spend in that. instead of spending in some other channel we u...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uch hours that we spend in that. instead of spending in some other channel we use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87072243346 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87592231402 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0075657832 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1666666667 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168189102104 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06212589313 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694238432858 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104227428355 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638188088353 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.