Television has many useful functions to play in everyone’s life, such as companion and entertainment. Discuss your viewpoint on TV and support your answer with examples.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about useful functions of Television to play in everyone’s life, such as companion and entertainment. While it is possible to claim that TV has many benefits to people, my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
There are many reasons why Television is important to people. One of them is that it gives information about activities done in nationally or globally, such as news. It can also be argued that TV gives entertainment to people, for instance, watching movies and soccer. Moreover, it should also be taken into account that this information and entertainment broadcast by TV can quickly help people to stay updated on what is going on around the world.
However, those who argue that Television cause some problems take a different view and say it can also be a negative thing. Firstly, it is claimed that TV cause children to spend most of their time watching programs instead of studying resulting in failure in their studies. Then, there are concerns about type of scenes that appear on TV that can affect children, such as, pornography.
While there are arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that Television should be used to give information and entertainment to people. I would strongly suggest that Parents should give some restrictions to their children to avoid bad characters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02834008097 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88547256246 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562753036437 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8808545822 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167138852439 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063948371716 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873827841969 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103318646455 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810605283683 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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