The violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Showcasing of violence as a means of entertainment in TV and movies is a long debatable that whether such showcasing increase crime in the society or not. I do not agree with that group of people who believe violence which is portrayed in public is a reason for the increase in crime in our society. This essay will discuss with some logic and examples for my point of view.
Violence in public broadcasting has no connection with the actual crime in society as there should be a proper reason for crime. TV or movie is no way could be a reason for crime. All the violence in TV or movies only spread the message that violence is not good for society. It’s completely people’s choice whether they choose to be a criminal.
Displaying of violence in TV and movies also save people in many ways by warning them of the place of the violence. For example, if there is an ongoing riot in some place, through the TV people get to the news and they avoid going to that place. Thus displaying violence serves as a warning which saves people’s life.
The essay has discussed that displaying of violence does not promote violence in our society rather it spreads a message that the end result of violence is always bad. Moreover, it also saves our life by providing visuals and news of violence in a particular area so that we can avoid those places. Thus, keeping in mind all the above, I believe that the violence portrayed in TV and movies does not promote crime in our society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58955223881 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55873311825 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470149253731 0.580463131201 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9226408484 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6153846154 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 2.75862068966 435% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329149495703 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131139012218 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920821770181 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209449409653 0.151781067708 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480481782442 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.5310837438 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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