Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
The effects of violence shown in movies, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial change in crime rate has sparked the controversy over potential impact of the trend on our society in recent years. It can be agreed that watching violence, can let to more criminals. This essay will elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of topic and thus will let to a logical conclusion.
At the ouset, there are deluges of arguments in favor of my stance, but most conspicuous one lies in the fact that we should make more and more peace-making shows. For instance, if kids watch violence and fighting scenes all the time, they will growup have a negative image about the surrounds.
Nevertheless, some people adopt the opposing view and tend to believe that, watching violence can led people to know about consequence of any crimal activity. A startling new research in this area invariably reveals that knowing the result of our action will led us to be a good citizen of our country.
In the light of above discussion, it can be concluded that impact of violence is prominent, although it has numbers of drawback that should be well handled. Thus negative side outweigh the positive side.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95145631068 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75401488428 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.353580819 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152883211519 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556558708009 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422867009308 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813008228326 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435386891521 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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