What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals technology has been one of the most prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analysis and explain whether they are boon or bane for our society. I will elaborate its pros and cons in the further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are myriad merits of automation. The first and foremost, technology makes our easy in all ways because it has gifted us with a variety of things which are very useful in our daily life. Probing further, it provides us remote lifestyle. As a result, with a one click of a button we can get access to various leisure modes. As a case in point, masses can communicate with their near and dear ones, which was not a case in the past.
On the contrary, every rose has its own thorns, so there are some cons of machinery work. Firstly, it generates immense of ailments which are very harmful for individuals. To cite an example, majority of population around the globe are suffering from a range of diseases by the use of technology gadgets. Last but not least, it also leads to sedentary lifestyle. This is because People always prefer to utilize their time on internet.
To conclude, I firmly believe that automation have crucial role in our life because of its advancement. People should use these gadgets for s specific period of time because it will help them to get rid of maladies.
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- Foreign languages should be made compulsory in the primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement? 77
- In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invention of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology? 77
- Personal development is the base for professional development. To what extent do you agree or disagree/ 55
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of mass media? 67
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...should use these gadgets for s specific period of time because it will help them to get rid of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71102661597 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60532585751 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2294265253 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4375 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0562298657239 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0151427035817 0.0925447433944 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231642623123 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0292356315282 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204994900946 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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