What are the positive and negative impacts of tourism in developing countries?

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What are the positive and negative impacts of tourism in developing countries?

Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals impacts of tourism has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People always held some conflicting views on this issue. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
To begin with, tourism plays pivotal role in economic growth of a country because they pay taxes to authority for travelling to their destinations. To cite an example, foreigners have to pay foreign direct tax which ultimately increases the overall economic revenue of a particular country. Moreover, because of tourism masses have opportunities to get jobs in different hotels, shops and many more places. Foreigners have to hire the tourist guide because of language problem.
On the contrary, there are also some drawbacks of tourism. First and the foremost is that, it effect on culture as well as traditions. For example, majority of people follow the other’s culture with which when they watch western culture they started follow and regret their own costumes. Moving further, by following cultures and others activities individual also have habit of drugs that is harmful but they take as fun.
To put it in nutshell, every coin has two sides there are some negative impacts but it good for nation to develop their economic growth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effects'?
Suggestion: effects
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13716814159 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66629179042 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632743362832 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4791460753 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3076923077 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128454985168 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412625436109 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571950030482 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809044426488 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542153321581 0.0609392437508 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 65.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 59.0 Out of 90
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