What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
Nowadays, usage of social media has became a trend and people tends to stay online for whole day. However, there are both merits and demerits of staying connected at social media for 24 hours a days. In this essay we will discuss the drawbacks and benefits of using social networking sites on daily basis for 24 hours.
To begin with, social media is a kind of addiction and it has changed the normal way of our lives.Two decades earlier, sleeping habits of people were quite strict but today people likes to sleep late because social media has become a weakness for them. For instance, a recent study suggests that students who do not sleep in time because of staying online on social sites are found to be less efficient and more lazy in class rooms. Therefore, it is evident that the using social media every time has far reaching negative impacts not only on our society but on our health also.
On the other hand, using social media for 24 hours a day can keep us updated about news, entertainment and about the live's of our friends.It also provided us an convenient entertainment on our finger tips. For example, social media collectively provide all sorts of channels on a single platform which enables the users to have a glance on everything together without the need of scrolling different TV channels. Hence, it is apparent that the why many are in favor of using social media for 24 hours a day.
This essay discussed how social media is effecting our health by keeping us entertained all the time. In my opinion, excess of everything is bad and that's why usage of social media for 24 hours a day is having more disadvantages as compared to its benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
Nowadays, usage of social media has became a trend and people tends to stay online...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... connected at social media for 24 hours a days. In this essay we will discuss the draw...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Two
...has changed the normal way of our lives.Two decades earlier, sleeping habits of peo...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t only on our society but on our health also. On the other hand, using social med...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ment and about the lives of our friends.It also provided us an convenient entertai...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ives of our friends.It also provided us an convenient entertainment on our finger ...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'why'?
Suggestion: why
...TV channels. Hence, it is apparent that the why many are in favor of using social media...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...pinion, excess of everything is bad and thats why usage of social media for 24 hours ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66891891892 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4492287959 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5453743786 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.636363636 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421047591855 0.242375264174 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192943314834 0.0925447433944 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110613422642 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288004426184 0.151781067708 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942326776224 0.0609392437508 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.