What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hrs a day.
Recently, we have witnessed mammoth growth in the use of social media among all sections of the society. Proponents are debating over its positive and negative influences on people and on their behaviors. Many are of the view that it has profound benefits, however, others hold opposite view stating that it has severe detrimental impacts on the physical and mental health of the members. In this article, I am going to discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of staying connected on social media for 24 hrs. a day.
To begin with, there are numerous ill effects of staying connected on the social media for 24 hrs. a day, it makes people addicted and lazy which have both psychological and medical severities. For instance, after various research, it has proven that social media is not only the biggest time waster but also leads to genetic problems like obesity. Moreover, children are not interested in outdoor sporting activities due to higher engagement on social media sites like the Facebook and Instagram, this led to poor cognitive and holistic development in them.
On the other hand, there are minor advantages to staying connected on social media with friends and families. Due to the enormous penetration of social media people can stay connected with their distance family members, removing physical location barrier. It helps to eradicate homesickness for the people leaving away from family. Furthermore, we can learn wide verities of diverse culture and rituals of foreign land staying far away.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that there are both pros and cons of staying connected on social media for round the clock. If used wisely it can be boon for the society otherwise, it can turn in to the ban.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04810996564 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64379338935 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6517118895 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456507284845 0.242375264174 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152320687395 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141215089255 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269740025201 0.151781067708 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331527688449 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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