What is the most significant invention and its corresponding to last 100 years; the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain
why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Recently, the phenomenon of the most significant invention and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the new invention is highly challenging, such issue is regarded as thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that computers should be considered as a revolutionary invention, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, computers provide the society with some noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that influencing all aspects of our lives, as well as facilitating all tasks, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that the new applications, such as Skype or Facebook, revolutionized the way we communicate, and also they are highly beneficial in education, international business, and science. Hence, the beneficial ramifications of computers can be observed.
Within the realm of the technological advancement, the excess using of computers might exacerbate the consequences of being too reliant on technology. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of poor eyesight relate to the reality that the demerits of putting the strain on eyes pertain to staring at the screens. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the severe health problems are correlated negatively with sitting in front of the computers for a long time. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of adverse effects of high technology.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I tend to profoundly believe that computers are the most remarkable invention in the contemporary world in comparison with another advancement, but it is recommended that it should be used under proper guidance and supervision to diminish its detrimental effects on people's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ontested by many that the matter of the new invention is highly challenging, such issue is re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55700325733 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35146388271 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 379.143842365 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8595346314 50.4703680194 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.090909091 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.9669160288 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734885753898 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268300895267 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454797167502 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0450025462222 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310689630447 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 53.1260098522 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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