whether design of building will have positive or negative impact on peoples life and work
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing
that modern design of building attract the people and increase their work ability. There is a widespread
worry that would only lead to myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and
should be rejected.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that well designed
buildings enhance the work performance of the workers by providing safe and comfortable environment. Not
only can monumets provide good ventilation and space to people as they stay healthy, but traditional
buildings can also broaden the horizens of knowledge by providing valuable information about their
ancestors. Needless to say, all these benefits stand society in good stead, when it comes to constructing
modern buildings.
Another pivotal aspects of argument is that thanks to innovative infrastructure, these provide privacy to
people as compare to old buildings. Besides, these buildings also reflect the standard of society and country.
To cite an example, in India, accoding to survey various traditional buildings such as Tajmahal, Golden
Temple and many more, attract the foreign visitors as they know about the culture and rituals of bygone days.
Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of constructing modern monuments.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that benefits of these modern
infrastructure are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, well, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56611570248 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89945165322 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599173553719 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.662993621 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15398673281 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472560435621 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593417740995 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489803578948 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613613098199 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.