Whether studying films at school is as important as studying literature

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Whether studying films at school is as important as studying literature

films have been the paramount source of entertainment since the invention of televisions and big screens. It is virutally impossible to find a family or individual
who does not watch a film during their leisure. For decades, film makers have been producing movies which caters all the sections of the society. With the growing popularity
more and more movies are being released every years which has raised a serious question in the mind of many pandits. they are asking if films should be studied just like
literature is studied ? In this essay, I am going to present some rationales behind studying the films.

It is very important to study the films to understand their intent, messages and content as they play an important role in building the mindset of the people. The content of the movie
greatly influence young children and the youth. For example a recent study reveal that children, below 12 years, who watches action movies are more aggressive than those children who don't watch action movies.
These children are more likely to be involved in the anti social activites when they grow up.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 186.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01075268817 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46491001994 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 379.143842365 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5792653493 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 7.25397266985 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160744384441 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660874549202 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980526990186 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802998055792 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951699227306 0.0609392437508 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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