TPO 03 - Question 1
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-10-29 | Pauline_Bkr | 70.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2016-10-15 | SheLaya | 80.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-04-05 | dadfarfardad361 | 66.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-10-17 | dinesh1997 | 90.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2017-09-19 | mojtaba_aam | 90.00 | Check this speaking |
- 1055 in some places people spend a lot of money on parties that celebrate special family events. is this ever true in your country? do you think this is a good trend? 90
- 2481 do you think sportsmen and sportswomen are paid to much for what they do? 70
- 317 what kind of influence can friends have on our lives? 80
- 419 do you think consumerism is a positive or a negative development? 80
- 313 what do you think makes someone a good friend to a whole family? 70
Comments
oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.