TPO 03 - Question 1
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| 2017-03-29 | archimo | 60.00 | Check this speaking |
| 2018-09-28 | daryash72 | 50.00 | Check this speaking |
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- TPO 02 - Question 1Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why it is important. Please include specific details in your explanation 70
- 1152 1050 second first do you find it easy to keep in contact with friends and family? 70
- 339 do you think that new festivals will be introduced in the future 80
- 2411 what percentage of person's income should be spent on buying fashionable items? 60
- 1401 Tell me about your family. 70
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oh, my goodness)
oh, my goodness)
Why was it scored this way? I hoped to get 28. The idea was to write a paragon of an answer to strive to.
What should I change, improve to get a higher score?
I hope with your help to get a needed score. After I learn what is wrong, I will be able to work with it.
Thank you.
There are some reasons to get
There are other minor reasons to get only 24:
1. We heard 'in fact', 'in order to do so' which are extra. There are noting wrong with them, but potentially with bad credits.
2. There are duplicated content in the reasons two. again it is not serious, but we don't like it.
3. The last sentence is not clear for us.
Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your help.
I think that my habit to heavily use "because, in fact, in order to do so " is situated in writing. I do understand that normally people do not speak like this.
Duplicated content - bad habit again.
Thank you.
24 in 30
One sentence can be removed from the reason one. a little bit long.