The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
The given bar chart demonstrates the proportion of various kinds of
accommodation selected during vacation in 2010 by British people from
different regions including England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland.
As can be seen from above graph , the percentage of people who used hotel
was the most prefered acommodation types in all four countries.
Looking at the chart, in England, Scotland, Wales, the figure of staying in
hotel was the highest, at around 50% . After that, self-catering ranked at
second in this survey data, accounted for roughy 30%. Whereas, the number
of two remaining forms kept at a lower level from 5% to 10% for each nation.
While the percentage of tourist who choosing camping form accounted for
nearly twice in England and Wales during the whole time scale, visitor in
Scotland followed a contrasting patten.
On the other hand, the quantity of traveller in Northen Ireland had a
completely different trend. Just over 30% was the figure of tourists voting
caravans in clination to self-catering category and camping, with more than
10%.
It noticeable that caravan form was more popular with British visitor in
Nothern Ireland than the remaining nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...land. As can be seen from above graph , the percentage of people who used hotel...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in hotel was the highest, at around 50% . After that, self-catering ranked at se...
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Line 12, column 46, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to camp'.
Suggestion: to camp
... the percentage of tourist who choosing camping form accounted for nearly twice in Eng...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, then, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40314136126 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70842253577 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0659949411 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 3.83414634146 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09999327424 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392676463533 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610002061763 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0309018099031 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466173684223 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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