The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants for our planet and give the solution.
In this days, there are many problems involved governments and organization with themselves. Although the environmental pollution regarded as thoroughly most pressing by the public around the world, the rising in population is another problem for the inhabitants on our planet. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze these two difficulties.
To begin with, there are various reasons to claim that the issues of environment and population are most pressing for the people in our plant. At first, the climate change is the consequence of the environmental pollution. Producing diverse gasses such as greenhouse gasses and carbon dioxide are the cause of global warming. However, these gasses can be declined by governmental roles. For example, the government's legislation could prevent the many factories and industries to produce these toxic and harmful gasses.
In addition, increasing in young people has a positive effect on development in the economy. But, rising in population is a substantial issue for the governments. The governments are facing a lot of problems such as providing food sources and creating jobs and unsatisfied people with their services. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by Tehran University researchers in 2015 has shown that a significant number of governments cannot be responsible the enhancing demands from their too much population.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic and the solutions, I profoundly believe that environmental problems and population increase are main issues that governments have become concerned about them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
In this days, there are many problems involved ...
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Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...by governmental roles. For example, the governments legislation could prevent the many fact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60728744939 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10324876996 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2785308807 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26384842339 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820130089274 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792847764898 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149834229591 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918376092215 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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