In many parts of the world, the way people live in cities has experienced a huge change in the last few decades. It is very common for city dwellers to live in apartment block, especially in highly populated countries. This essay will outline the pros and cons of this living style.
On the one hand, living in apartments has many advantages. First of all, it is more affordable to rent or buy. Because the price of the land is divided according to the number of apartments on the premise, each housing is much cheaper than simply living in a house on the ground floor. In addition, living in apartment is more convenient. Since there are much more residents in one blocks, the facilities and shops are more likely to open close by. As a result, the residents are able to travel to their destinations simply by foot and subways.
However, this lifestyle comes with several shortcomings as well. The most obvious one is the noise. Some apartments locate in the busy areas where roads are full of honking and motoring noise. Likewise, sometimes the neighbors on similar floors may hold a party or undergo renovation, which can also be loud and bothersome. As a result, people may feel hard to relax even in their homes. Another disadvantage of flat living is privacy concern. As buildings are close to each other, residents have to put their curtains on all the time or get exposed to those living across the windows.
In conclusion, despite of the noise and privacy concern that some residents occasionally have, living in apartments is a more beneficial way of living in city areas because it offers great convenience and lower price.
- In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages? 61
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 67
- People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns? 73
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78873239437 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61074869117 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6161119543 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306704441513 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09144030058 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609593753004 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179771255977 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368365895863 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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