Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There has been a controversy as regards whether committing a crime is attributed by social issues or whether it is a result of innate characteristics. This essay will elaborate some important factors for both argument and I agree that law-breakers are stemmed from external factors more than that of internal factors for the following reasons.
On the one hand, people suppose that personal characteristics decide their life of criminal. Firstly, this could be because citizens who have aggressive behaviors such as animal violence when they were a child easy to become offenders than kind inhabitants. According to a prestige magazine, 99% of serial murderers admit that they image about cruelty to animals before they take life from one person. Secondly, because of their laziness and selfishness, they tend to steal from others to earn money rather than make ends meet. In Vietnam, there are a wide range of burglaries or robberies on a daily basis because of that reasons.
On the other hand, I believe that starvation and social issues are rooted for breaking the law. First of all, people are put in a high pressure on paying taxes or cost of living while they are jobless. According to Vnexpress, more than 70% law-breakers are jobless people. Another striking reason is based on poverty. An illustration for this factor is a story about a prisoner in Quang Nam province, because of his hunger, he stole three cups of rice and three dried fish but unfortunately, he was found so he killed its host. Apparently, when people have no sufficient money to make ends meet, they would be tempted to pursue illegal activities to save their lives.
In conclusion, I support the idea that the fundamental reasons for crime are from social problems and famine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, as regards, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01360544218 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75511883761 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8494641952 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130278274867 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456405196831 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048610692522 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888371016115 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395156585318 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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