Some people are beieve that family members os important than friends.Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...play vital role in human being life also,for animals.The member of family is influnc...
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...le in human being life also,for animals.The member of family is influnce on each ot...
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...ber of family is influnce on each other.Few masses are think that the tribe is nece...
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...s influnce on each other.Few masses are think that the tribe is necessary part of lif...
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...essary part of life than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and...
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...part of life than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and I...
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... than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and I will delve my ...
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...comming pharagraphs. To commence with,there are various perspectives about family.I...
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...e are various perspectives about family.It is first stage of life due to blood rel...
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...ildren because parents give birth to us.In other words we can say that mother or f...
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... kinds of thinga such as we thought walk,talk.eat and so on from an our domestic life...
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...we thought walk,talk.eat and so on from an our domestic life.Moreover,the house member...
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...eat and so on from an our domestic life.Moreover,the house members are complete the all ...
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...so on from an our domestic life.Moreover,the house members are complete the all requ...
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...nts to their children for the happiness.Also,they give alot of money while their stu...
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...to their children for the happiness.Also,they give alot of money while their studying...
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...ying in an institute. Probing further,parents are well supported for infants.They are...
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...,parents are well supported for infants.They are always be helpfull in their lifeas ...
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...l supported for infants.They are always be helpfull in their lifeas well as the ol...
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...e often motivate to about babies future.Furthrmore,the family person are want to become an...
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...tivate to about babies future.Furthrmore,the family person are want to become an edu...
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...to become an educated and capable or VIP person to their teenanger due to the b...
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...apable or VIP person to their teenanger due to the best guidence.Instead of,our ...
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...ir teenanger due to the best guidence.Instead of,our mother or father is very careful...
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...er due to the best guidence.Instead of,our mother or father is very carefully for ...
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...t they improve the lacks. To conclude,both are important however in my opinion pe...
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...both are important however in my opinion people should never forget kindness of t...
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...forget kindness of their foster parents.In my an experince,nowadays yongsters are ...
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... their foster parents.In my an experince,nowadays yongsters are doing evil behavior with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21645021645 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38173661025 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65367965368 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1554888939 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 301.25 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.75 20.7667163134 278% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978115724609 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637501699906 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475688797088 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637501699906 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475688797088 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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