TPO 24
The reading passage is about the appearance of an old fossil of Tyrannosaurus rex and some research that show some materials which remained of blood vessels, red blood cells and collagen matrix. However, the lecturer rejects these findings and says that these clues are unconvinced.
Firstly, the reading passage says after breaking T.rex leg's bone, the researchers noticed that there were many small branching channels which might be hollow in the bones where blood vessels were there and they referred to soft flexible organic substance into the channels while
the lecturer rebuts this finding and states that long time after dying, bacteria lived in the hollow bones and discovered substance is not related to flexible organic, in all likelihood they belong to bacteria colonies.
Secondly, the reading passage indicates that spheres that include iron-a material are very crucial to red blood cells for carrying oxygen to tissues are found in different parts of inner bones. However, the lecturer explains that a place where T.rex fossil has found, there were also other animals which they did not have any red blood cells. So, the red blood cells maybe belong to other organics.
Finally, the reading passage mentions scientists test on T.rex's leg bone and it proposes that they found collagen that is necessary to bone tissue but unlike the passage, the lecturer says that collagen tissue cannot survive after less time. So it is impossible collagen is found by researchers after 70 million years. The collagen maybe comes from other resources like humans who touch the bones with their hands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rganic substance into the channels while the lecturer rebuts this finding and sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22393822394 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29250010142 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.978130025 49.2860985944 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.333333333 110.228320801 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 21.698381199 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433386419543 0.272083759551 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165991642919 0.0996497079465 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089157347292 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226536689873 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767342085019 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.3589403974 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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