Nowadays culture is different in some ways comparing to the past. Do you think the culture development has a positive or negative trend?
Generations ago, the culture and traditions of an overwhelming majority of people have not been subjected to any deviations and stayed immutable for many years. Nevertheless, customs and cultural heritage have undergone dramatic changes over the past decade. This essay aims to investigate the mentioned view and present the principal reasons as to why it has a positive tendency.
One of the main constructive trends of traditions' advancements is that it significantly contributes to economic development. In other words, the worldwide economization of culture accompanied by the privatization and commercialization of knowledge, generates a tremendous economical growth. Moreover, a paper published by Dr. John Watson, the world-renowned economist, reveals that the global market improvement is caused by the substantial reorientation of cultural values. Therefore, it is clearly seen that the evolution of culture is the crucial driving force of the sustainable economic progress.
Similarly, it is well-known that socialization of culture originated the essential enhancement of the educational system. That is to say, that amendments in traditions brought a new perception of education importance, which in turn, shifted tuitions and schooling priorities creating an upheaval in the traditional system of teaching. It can be illustrated by the latest research conducted by Cambridge University, which elucidated the fact that the increasing number of students can be explained by the alterations in the cultural and social patterns of behavior.
Taking all these points into consideration, it can be concluded that advances of traditions and mutations of societal behavioural norms caused by cultural evolution are drastically beneficial for the global community. Needless to say that this is a serious enhancement in comparison with the past, however, if cultural artifacts, signs and symbols, which shape public mentality, had not been changed, we would probably still had a high level of illiteracy and low standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...on of knowledge, generates a tremendous economical growth. Moreover, a paper published by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77483443709 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40224657923 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7630661888 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171319333999 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615830686082 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029098409342 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984222579077 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236818112542 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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