Creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence
Intelligence can be defined as the ability to understand a problem and find out the most feasible solution to it.There are many factors to measure true intelligence ,some of them are ability to understand others problem, ability to adapt to new things, how quickly one can learn new things,creativity,self-awareness,ability to handle a difficult situation calmly any many more.Only considering creativity as a factor to measure intelligence may not hold true.
The measure of intelligence varies from case to case, each and every field whether it may be business, politics , marketing or service ,have different factors on which we can measure intelligence of a person For example, In the computer programming job ,a person can be considered truly intelligent if he/she is able to develop application without any bugs and have a good logical understanding and is able to complete the task in the given deadline.Creativity can be defined as the ability to develop unique and innovative ideas .
Many occupation requires a person to bring unique ideas and implement them in a efficient way,For example film directors need to have the ability to bring new and innovative ideas in their film for it to be a blockbuster.In such case Creative ideas of the director can be considered as a factor to measure intelligence.In journalism , people tend to write new article each and every day,if a journalist can write an article which is well organised, follows standard English and is precise ,that article can be considered an example of intelligence.
To measure intelligence one should consider many factors of an individual ,one such factor can be the ability to handle a difficult situation with calmness and able to find a feasible solution to it.For example, In an organization,a person in managerial a post if he has the ability to manage his team ,handle the clients requirements,and perform efficiently in a crisis,he/she can be termed an an intelligent person.In such case we measure intelligence as how effectively one can manage an organization.
In conclusion, There are many factors such as ability to learn new things quickly , self awareness,handling difficult situation which are necessary for an individual to be intelligent.Yes Creativity is one of the factor required to measure intelligence, but using creativity as the only factor is not feasible.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32180851064 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.76108794745 2.79657885939 134% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452127659574 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 23.0359550562 326% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5988452579 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 400.2 118.986275619 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.2 23.4991977007 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.21951772744 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290820288809 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172818933737 0.0831039109588 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463715014332 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172818933737 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463715014332 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 14.1392134831 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.57 48.8420337079 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.92365168539 256% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 12.1743820225 287% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 11.2143820225 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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