Pursuing a financially stable career tends to inhibit creativity and innovation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the passage the importance of pursuing the stability in financially aspects are condsidered as the inhibity of creativity and innovation.Any person from good financial area can easily see himself with using his knowledge and persistent. I totally disagree with this point of view. There are no relation with the economical situation and innovatiove power of an individual.
Firstly, hard work and dedication is called the most crucial thing to gain every goal. If the poor condition of economiocally stability might make a obstacle in the way of acquiring success. but the hardship can be reduced with the industrious mentality and not to give up obstinating quality. For example, A.P.J Abdul Kalam, a great scientist recongnized of all time, was born in a impecuious family. His mother helped him more by selling her ornaments and he also sold newspaper in railway station for his livelihood. The sorrowful situation may not stop him to be a scholar in India. All toughest theory and method by invented him is considered as valuable in history.
Secondly, wealth in abundant amount does not require to be a wonderful person in the earth. Though money in needed to consume necessary elements in our daily life. Many socialists think that to get enough availability of necessities in one's lifetime might cause a harmful influence in the further steps. For example, a lot of emperiors have a good position in the society for their wealthy condition and they can continuously buy their all necessities with more luxarious manner. As their sons and daughters do not able to know how to control this kind of availability solely or jointly, they lost their kingdom and prosperity.
Furthermore, a young soul have a remarkable potentiality to prove himself in any trouble. In a better position like having all materials with a sign of your hand can set your mind as an noob thinker. In the contrast, a large and broadened phychologically stable with a healthy mindset helps to conqur in life. Likewise, Nikola Tesla, who is very poor in his childhood but with his dedication he was able to come up as a successful scientist in history.
So, it is very clear that not only the financial purpose is always maintained to be innovative and more analytical in the future but also be a knowledge gainer in every steps of life is more needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92893401015 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91709065998 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581218274112 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6798369086 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997591395655 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260478637675 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305270099817 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561764489488 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315824014033 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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