You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Advertisement is a huge business and we come across at least one advertisement in our day to day life. People have different opinion regarding advertisements, some feel it keeps you updated with the latest product in the market and some feel they work as a catalyst in increasing your desire to buy new things which might not be useful. This essay will discuss why some people believe that advertisement encourages us to buy things we do not need.
Celebrities are hired to promote the product so that more and more people will buy it. It is easy for marketing companies to hire celebrity and promote their product as this has been a proven mantra for the success of the product. People easily get influenced by the celebrities they follow and tend to buy product even if they do not need. They believe if their favorite super star is using it they should also use it. For example, we have seen that beauty products are promoted by actress and actors. They claim that using them for few days will make us look beautiful, but that is not always true. Similarly we have seen many marketing firm use such kinds of trick to influence the people.
Information given in the advertisement is not applicable to everyone and has some terms and condition. These terms and condition are shown in a small font in the corner of the screen to save the product owners from any legal complications. For example, some food products claim in the advertisement that they are 99.99% natural and there is some hidden information on the screen which states that they also use natural chemicals that is 0.1% but can be very harmful. Such advertisement are not only false but also dangerous and we cannot take any actions as they are not violating any law but just using tricks to hide the information. Some information is hidden to influence people, which leads to people buying the product with assumption of it being natural.
I firmly believe that some advertisements are just to encourage people to buy products when they are really not required. Above paragraphs clearly mention how marketing firms hire celebrities and hide some information to influence more and more people to buy their product, people tend to buy it just based on the people promoting or false information provided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...beautiful, but that is not always true. Similarly we have seen many marketing firm use su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, regarding, similarly, so, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80867346939 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67246509997 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479591836735 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6430388359 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.882352941 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231767559576 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894756262697 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733086086638 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164264227288 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703018771276 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.