You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:Explain the reason why you decline the offerExpress your gratitudeExplain why you like your current job very much

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You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
Explain the reason why you decline the offer
Express your gratitude
Explain why you like your current job very much

Dear Mr.Lopez,

I am writing with regard to the position offered me. I would be really happy if I could have cooperation with your company. But unfortunately, I have to decline your offer because of some reasons. First of all, I had to keep the current job until the end of the project in which I am one of the executives. In addition, your offer is a full- time employment. As a result, it is impossible to be accepted to do it at the same time along with the current job.

I want to thank you because you have considered me as a skilled and reliable person. The cooperation with your company has always been my dream. I hope that you could understand my situation.

I have found a golden opportunity in my current job as a manager for a global project that I have tried a lot to get so that I would like to achieve my final goal which is to end the project successfully. If the project is implemented successfully, I will have a better resume to apply for overseas companies in the coming future.
Thank you for your understanding in advance.

Yours Sincerely,

Sarah Smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lopez
Dear Mr.Lopez, I am writing with regard to the pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, in addition, as a result, first of all, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49748743719 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82018359674 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8005160598 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8461538462 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23502175062 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928054000351 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060796960598 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161952710479 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800910039391 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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