In many parts of the world, animals are kept in zoos. What are the advantages of zoos?
Animals are usually cared in the special places named zoo. This remedy to keep animals have various merits. I will explain some of which in this essay.
A first and perhaps most significant benefit of keeping animals in zoo is that they are able to live safely. This is because in the nature some species are hunted by stronger ones so that the generation of those which are quite rare will disappear over time. But if creatures which are weaker are protected in separate places, the generation of them will be saved for a long time. In addition, a second merit of zoo could be that people, and particularly children can see the different types of species such as mammals, and birds. Thus, the knowledge about animals which are related to their feed, treatment, and habits could be increased. Finally, the zoos with the special types of animals could be an important tourist attraction by which governments can earn much money annually. The bodget of selling the zoos' tickets can be spent on the care of animals. As a result, the maintenance of zoos is not an extra cost for states.
Although those who are in favour of animal friendly treatment might think that keeping animals in zoo is cruel, the benefits of zoo cannot be ignored. The zoos are not only considerably beneficial for animals, but also for human beings and governments.
In summary, the advantages of zoos in which animals could live safely are countless. Both the governments and people can benefit from zoo twice as many as animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, thus, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7969348659 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4912111922 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2830845191 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197210926871 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772846945013 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592094793393 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150794040103 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476347400316 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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