The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solution can you suggest?
The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solution can you suggest?
The internet has made a dramatic transformation in term of sharing and consuming information, but this can cause some issues. This essay will discuss potential problems and the measures that government and individuals can take to address these problems.
The major problems which are caused by the internet are that children could become an internet addict, and the information can be stolen. Firstly, teenagers tend to spend a significant amount their time on the Internet for surfing and playing game instead of studying or exercising. For example, after in school time, young people are preoccupied with the social network on the computer the whole time. As a result, their outcome can be reduced due to the lack of prepared study. Secondly, information can easily be stolen by computer hackers. An amount of private information might spread out of individuals control to use for bad purposes such as slandering and blackmail. Therefore, the safety of internet users are likely to be threatened
There are some actions (that) authorities and individuals can implement to tackle these problems discussed above. The first solution is that people should take control of their children’s time. For instance, individuals can use some application on the smartphone to limit the time to access Facebook or Youtube. Therefore, children have a chance to play outside and study rather than surfing the internet all day. Secondly, the government should adopt policies to deal with the Internet crimes. Authorities could get control of the internet in the whole country to guard individuals against the attacks from cybercrime. This might ensure that resident wouldto be safe in the virtual world.
In conclusion, the development of the internet could result in some problems and some solutions could be taken to solve these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80498535313 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525835866261 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6727521848 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6111111111 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416516550746 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136611161449 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189910612196 0.0667982634062 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311258287013 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.34470167538 0.056905535591 606% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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