It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married beforethey are 30, as this is best both for individual and for society.Do you agree or disagree ?
A popular argument nowadays is about marriage the age at which one should get married. A part of the population suggests that marriage should occur before the age of thirty as it could be conducive for them and the community they belong to. I completely disagree with this school of thought.
Age thirty is assumed by the community as an age where most people would be able to make calculated, conscious and well-informed decisions about life. Therefore, a part of society is of the opinion that the youth should get married before they turn thirty.
However, marriage is also perceived in society as a solidifying the love between two individuals. In the past, marriage used to be an attempt to join two powerful households. In today's society, love and marriage are closely related. People wish to fall in love and then get married. The love between individual occurs at any unforeseeable time in life. Therefore, it is highly unlikely to adhere to a timeframe for marriage.
Additionally, marriage was invented by humans as an attempt to create order in society. Furthermore, there are no natural rules involved in marriage. For instance, no other mammal in the animal kingdom gets married. I believe there is no correct age to get married. If two individuals do decide to get married, they can get married at any age they feel comfortable.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that every human should be given their freedom to choose if and when they wish to get married. Age should never be a factor to decide when one should get married.
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- test 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84962406015 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75800501579 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515037593985 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5862526746 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219887518971 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705512497775 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412571060614 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126519116092 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02285224275 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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