Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Suggestion: don't
... that People should do things that they dont enjoy doing and they think that doing t...
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... they think that doing things that they dont like to do can result in achieving and ...
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...ieving and making them happy and proud.In contrast,others oppose the statement an...
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... making them happy and proud.In contrast,others oppose the statement and considering it...
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Suggestion: They
... life and it can get them into troubles.They suggest that people should do things th...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: CANT[1]
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ld do things they enjoy doing.if things cant successfully achieved.From the point of...
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...ng.if things cant successfully achieved.From the point of my view ,i agree with the...
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...ully achieved.From the point of my view ,i agree with the statement.Here are the ...
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...ly achieved.From the point of my view ,i agree with the statement.Here are the f...
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...of my view ,i agree with the statement.Here are the following reasons why i agree w...
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...ment.Here are the following reasons why i agree with the statement. To begin wit...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , first
...agree with the statement. To begin with,first of all,There are a lot of things that w...
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Suggestion: , There
...e statement. To begin with,first of all,There are a lot of things that we dont enjoy ...
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...f all,There are a lot of things that we dont enjoy doing such as studying,playing ch...
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Suggestion: , playing
...hat we dont enjoy doing such as studying,playing chess,cleaning toilets but they are all...
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...joy doing such as studying,playing chess,cleaning toilets but they are all important for ...
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Suggestion: I
...ut they are all important for our life.I would like to talk this from my experie...
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Suggestion: I
...ke to talk this from my experience.when i was little,studying was something i was...
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Suggestion: , studying
...his from my experience.when i was little,studying was something i wasnt interested in and...
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...n i was little,studying was something i wasnt interested in and didnt enjoy reading.B...
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...was something i wasnt interested in and didnt enjoy reading.But my parents pressured ...
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Suggestion: But
...t interested in and didnt enjoy reading.But my parents pressured me to study and i...
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...t my parents pressured me to study and i studied and became a topper in my class...
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Suggestion: , doing
...and learned more by reading. As a result,doing things that one doesnt enjoy doing can ...
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...ding. As a result,doing things that one doesnt enjoy doing can gain new experiences ...
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...snt enjoy doing can gain new experiences more. Secondly,Doing things that they...
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Suggestion: , Doing
...gain new experiences more. Secondly,Doing things that they dont enjoy doing is th...
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...ore. Secondly,Doing things that they dont enjoy doing is the main reason behind b...
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Suggestion: Many
...the main reason behind being successful.Many people werent successful because they ...
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...son behind being successful.Many people werent successful because they decided to giv...
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...use they decided to give it up if they didnt find it more easy and interesting.For e...
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...didnt find it more easy and interesting.For example ,Studying is something most peo...
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...it more easy and interesting.For example ,Studying is something most people dont e...
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...mple ,Studying is something most people dont enjoy doing and they drop out of colleg...
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...d they drop out of college. As a result,they became unemployed and cant find jobs be...
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... As a result,they became unemployed and cant find jobs because in my community,a deg...
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...d cant find jobs because in my community,a degree is a must for job but they dont ...
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...ity,a degree is a must for job but they dont have any degree. Furthermore,a industri...
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...t they dont have any degree. Furthermore,a industrialist said that being a indust...
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... they dont have any degree. Furthermore,a industrialist said that being a indust...
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...ermore,a industrialist said that being a industrialist isnt something he dreamed...
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...ialist said that being a industrialist isnt something he dreamed of and didnt enjoy...
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...ialist isnt something he dreamed of and didnt enjoy because being a industrialist has...
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...reamed of and didnt enjoy because being a industrialist has got tough tasks and r...
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...d responsibilies But when he was little,he lived in a place where there were a lot...
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...ffering due to poverty and unemployment.As a result,the situation forced himself ...
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... to poverty and unemployment.As a result,the situation forced himself to work hard ...
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...ork hard and open many industries to be a industrialist and provided thousands of...
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...rn more things, have fun, but also it is some things we should do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99180327869 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13225955134 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.503419289 48.9658058833 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.375 100.406767564 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.75 20.6045352989 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.375 5.45110844103 337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 49.0 5.5376344086 885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414247810244 0.236089414692 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199888245148 0.076458572812 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14034707666 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162129146687 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129327501888 0.0645574589148 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 11.7677419355 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.1575268817 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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