If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
There is no shortage of debate whether people should go after the secure job opportunity which is easier for them or take the risk of waiting for something that is satisfactory to them. From my point of view, looking for a job position which is someone's preference and not necessarily the secure work is more advantageous. I will illustrate this in the following passages.
The most significant reason is that if a job is not satisfying to someone and it is not what they have dreamed of, they will not make significant progress. An important reason to go forward in your career, is to love what you do and think good about yourself while you do it. When a job is took only because it is secure it will not encourage you to move forward. In a research done in the 2016, a group of 2000 people were asked about their position in their job and how many levels have they progressed in the last 5 years. More that eighty percent of the people who have reached higher levels - became managers for example - were the ones that were happy and satisfied doing what they love, not following their careers just because it allowed them to have security. For this reason, I believe it is better to follow what you love in your career.
Another equally important point is that by following what you love in your career, you will be more satisfied in other aspects of your life. Since what you do is your true interest, it will not be burden that you have to carry each day just to finish it. Your job will be your hobby which you will enjoy to do. My own experience is a compelling example of this. As an architect, I am used to work long hours. Usually I start my day 8 in the morning and sometimes I have to work until 10 pm. Although this can be really exhausting, I really enjoy working. So, after a long day of work I hardly need any resting time, because my job is more like a hobby to me than something I must do just to earn money. The main reason is that I waited for the career I loved and did not rush into the first job position that I found. Accordingly, I enjoy every hour of my work and I am satisfied with other aspect of my life as I have time and energy to do them too.
It is also important to bear in mind that although a secure job might be enough to provide someone financially, they will never truly thrive in this aspect. For someone to have a good financial position in life, they should put time and effort in their career and to have the energy. To do this, you need to love what you do, to be satisfied in your job. So, you will spend time following it and will not give up.
In conclusion, I think it is better to follow what you love in your career and wait for the right job that you are satisfied with rather than taking the first secure job you are offered. This is because of the reasons I mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ost significant reason is that if a job is not satisfying to someone and it is not what they have...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...yourself while you do it. When a job is took only because it is secure it will not e...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy doing'.
Suggestion: enjoy doing
...r job will be your hobby which you will enjoy to do. My own experience is a compelling exam...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to working'.
Suggestion: used to working
... example of this. As an architect, I am used to work long hours. Usually I start my day 8 in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, look, really, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 43.0788530466 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25925925926 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31632348826 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418518518519 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.48551641 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282095862985 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084879150533 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769045701908 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20269067394 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526490623602 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.