You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Jonah,
I am wiring this letter to report the loss of my student identification card.
I recall seeing it last on Tuesday morning, during the archaeology seminar in the auditorium. I have looked for it in the seminar hall, and following attended classes.
I have also left my contact details with the janitor, and requested him to notify me if he manages to find my lost possession. I have checked my locker and my dorm, but I am unable to find it.
I am a science student and need to use the laboratory frequently. I am unable to access the main building due to the absence of my identification card. This has created a lot of nuisance for me.
I shall be highly obliged if you could intimate the lost and found department, as it was closed today. However, I am in urgent need and request you to issue a new identification card as soon as possible. I have enclosed two copies of my passport-size photos, and my student number is 324 094.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Kathleen Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss of my student identification card. I recall seeing it last on Tuesday morni...
^^^
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... archaeology seminar in the auditorium. I have looked for it in the seminar hall,...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll, and following attended classes. I have also left my contact details with ...
^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... he manages to find my lost possession. I have checked my locker and my dorm, but...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my dorm, but I am unable to find it. I am a science student and need to use th...
^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... need to use the laboratory frequently. I am unable to access the main building d...
^
Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nuisance seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of nuisances'.
Suggestion: a lot of nuisances
...y identification card. This has created a lot of nuisance for me. I shall be highly obliged if...
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Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... favorable response. Yours sincerely, Kathleen Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63783783784 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85519019155 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3099414243 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216569597203 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746127932884 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558479254368 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100932265244 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724616122428 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.