You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have recently moved to the house next to yours and planning to hold a house-warming party.
my name is Jack Sparrow and I am working at the University of Plymouth as the Lab Supervisor and have been a resident of Perth for nearly three decades, I bought this house from the previous owner as this locality is quite nearby to the college.
Thus I would be hosting a party, it will be a small gathering of friends and family. The event will start at 7 pm with drinks and snacks, then followed by a performance by a local magician who will entertain us with his super cool tricks and after that Dinner will be served. So I would like to invite you to this party, it will my pleasure to meet you and discover new insights about this locality as I am new here.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
warm wishes
Vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ning to hold a house-warming party. my name is Jack Sparrow and I am working a...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...lity is quite nearby to the college. Thus I would be hosting a party, it will be ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
... I look forward to seeing you soon. warm wishes Vinshu
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to seeing you soon. warm wishes Vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, then, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29069767442 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3203429373 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9786154125 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162920456257 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685267515516 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881650459449 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106702953673 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103299843845 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.