You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to my new laptop, which I bought in your electronic shop last Wednesday. The number of purchase is 734 on the cheque, and I have a warranty for two years.
Yesterday, I was working on my new device when it suddenly turned off. After that, I tried to turn on and restart the machine, but all my attempts were not successful.
Today, I need to complete my annual finance record and send it by email to my company. But the device unusable, and therefore I need to found another computer with internet to complete my purpose.
For this reason, I want from your company support about this problem. Firstly, the portable needs to be repaired, and at the time when it will be on the mending, I want to get another one for my work.
Thanks for your attention to this matter and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Valefar
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- The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. 89
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. 73
- IELTS 13 G T4 Essay 11
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. 73
- A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46987951807 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42393350192 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4319554226 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185676368541 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689994846967 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491421065598 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940161099174 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593658640524 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.