Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Crime figures inched up slightly in last few years and continuing an upward trajectory that began in 19 century. A prominent sentiment is that prison is only way to cut crime. I think education, teaching technical skill like problem solving in vehicle, plumbing and welding is positive way to decline crime rate in long-term view.
Lawbreakers break law because of many causes like lack of study and parents guideline during childhood all this criteria suitable to do an illegal act and behave negative and aggressive in communities. As a result few human believe that villain should get a chance to change their life in future. A large part of crime is economic. If people are working and have a good accommodation and family than Government should cut the percentages of crime. For a paradigm, a recent survey showed that people commit a crime who do not have enough money to full fill the basic requirements of life such as a food, cloths and house.
Nowadays, children do crime and play an insipensable part of total crime doing by all percentages. In other word, some people are use children for wrong job because children is easy to encourage and they do this job in low price. Therefore significant part of people assume that training and education is best option to reduce a crime and also rude and hard penalizing is not for children. Moreover this art help to opportunity to do respectful post in society and get a chance to start life with new way.
In conclusion, there are enormous small logic for doing crime so all this tiny reasons cut by teach criminal and reduce the heavy-duty punishment to offenders in prison.
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- Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family.Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?What other factors should be considered 61
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison were relevant. 56
- Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure. It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples 84
- Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some think the solution is for people to adjust to a simpler life while others believe that technology itself can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80141843972 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66809038499 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9129335229 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193030299821 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691249968348 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507225677225 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106103077845 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453774566704 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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