Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As we are living in an era of globalization in which advertisements of products play a pivotal role not only in it sale but also in imparting knowledge about the commodity. Thus there is a raging debate where some people say that commercials act as a source of knowledge while others believe that it allures people to buy unnecessary things. I agree with the former view and will elucidate it in the below paragraphs.
First and foremost advertisements are used not only established brands but also by startups in the industry to educate consumers. Many companies associate celebrities to promote their products and thus it acts an alluring mechanism for customers. Companies ranging from pharmaceutical to modern electronic gadgets provide benefits of their products on pamphlets thus helps the consumers to do a comparison with a competing product before making a final decision to eventually buy it. In a recent survey from Business Times, it was mentioned in an article that around 80 per cent of people are benefited with the advertisement as they aid consumers in decision-making ability.
Secondly, commercials also help consumers by increasing their knowledge base on the products which can improve their lives. In this era of digitization with the advent of the Internet, it becomes easier for customers to watch products adverts which can make their life simpler for instance use of modern gadgets like the washing machine, rice-cookers are already making a huge difference in the lives of people. Similarly, with the introduction of geo positing system maps and automatic gear shifting in the cars are making a huge impact in travelling long distances and the same is shown by various car manufacturers as a differentiator to improve human lives.
Thus In my opinion, though advertisement allure consumers to buy unnecessary products but it an important medium of telling the customer of new products and technology which can improve their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20504731861 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07638753351 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9412398195 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22571400043 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846863493656 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446146326101 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147837149829 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452596391083 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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