Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take
Dear Samantha,
I received your letter yesterday and I felt very embarrassed to know that we became the reason of discomfort for your family. We had planned to do house renovation earlier this year but owing to financial limitations at that we couldn’t managed to do it. However, my husband received his yearly bonus this month & thought to start the renovation right away. This house was first built almost 12 years ago & it required some detailed renovations particularly kitchen & washrooms.
I am extremely sorry for the problem caused by noise to you. I totally understand your pain & I appreciate that you have raised a concern and express your emotions. If I would be at your place I would have complaint about it way earlier.
However, let me assure you that I am we won’t be reason of your discomfort any further. Renovation work has almost finished and only final touch ups are in process that does not require hammering that creates noise. Worker will leave the house in two days.
Once again I apologize for the problem caused. Thank you for your patience and understanding.
Yours Truly,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Samantha, I received your letter yesterday and I f...
^^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed a concern and express your emotions. If I would be at your place I would have c...
^^
Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tience and understanding. Yours Truly, Sam
^^^
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and understanding. Yours Truly, Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75076930527 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686170212766 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7822017374 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6923076923 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332549055795 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121666388781 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101699018477 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195590718434 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822029208732 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.