You are looking for a part-time job.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
and say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you in regards to pursue suitable employment opportunities with the help of your agency.
my name is Ben Jones, a local resident of Sydney and I am a Computer Science graduate from the University of Plymouth Western Australia. I attained this degree last year and since then I have been trying for suitable job opportunities<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="job "></span>.
To elucidate during my graduation days I have attained programming skills in Java, Python and ASP.net and have used these programming languages in development of various applications and computer games thus I would like to pursue job opportunities in programming and software development roles. Additionally, I would like to highlight that I have developed many websites and payment gateway applications using programming languages like asp.net and these platforms are commercially deployed successfully. Moreover, I was also responsible for organizing computer gaming events and seminars on upcoming technologies like Artificial Intelligence during college days.
I hope the above-mentioned points will add value to my application and help in increasing employment opportunities with software firms.
I look forward to your immediate response in case additional information is required.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing to you in regards to pursue suitable employment opportunitie...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...nities with the help of your agency. my name is Ben Jones, a local resident of...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of your agency. my name is Ben Jones, a local resident of Sydney and I am a C...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., a local resident of Sydney and I am a Computer Science graduate from the Unive...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...graduate from the University of Plymouth Western Australia. I attained this degre...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97409326425 4.54256449028 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05644223634 2.54303337028 160% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.41237113402 135% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4023395025 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.111111111 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144397764226 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556071513026 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432656738 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769906454421 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483742330009 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 8.37731958763 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 70.7449484536 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 8.71597938144 199% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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